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A Brief Biography of Australian Cricketer Shane Warne

This is a brief biography of Australian cricketer Shane Warne. The student notes Warne's accomplishments in the sport, as well as controversies surrounding his career and his unexpected death.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bob's feedback:

"You have a lot of good information here on an interesting subject. However, this paper needs significant organizational attention. There doesn't seem to be a logical flow to the information provided; sentences about Warne's death are directly followed by discussions of his accomplishments. Consider putting together an outline with a paragraph dedicated to each subject you wish to discuss.

It is also difficult to tell whether you intend to focus on Warne's accomplishments or the emotional impact of his sudden death. Make sure your intro and conclusion serve as bookends for your main focus."

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