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A Comparison of Android and Apple Phones

This is a brief essay comparing and contrasting different aspects of Apple and Android smartphones. The author specifically looks at how phone users can get music on their devices, the quality of cameras, and the text messaging systems that come with each.
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K's feedback:

"This essay addresses a very timely topic. Your purpose is quite clear, and you do elaborate on the "ins and outs" of the different types of devices. Your second paragraph includes detailed information about the music for the phones. It would be great if you could carry that level of detail into the third and fourth paragraphs. Your concluding paragraph should be a summary of your essay. You can strengthen it by briefly touching on the music, camera, and messaging ideas mentioned earlier. There are a number of grammar issues that should be cleaned up before submitting this essay. For example, "Each phone has it's perks..." should be "Each phone has its perks..." You mentioned that you used MLA style for this paper. Please include some references to other works that help support your ideas about these phones. Online resources like Tom's Guide, PC Mag, and Consumer Reports provide reliable product reviews."

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