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A Personal Statement for a Pathology Residency

This personal statement describes the student's passion for pathology and the experiences that led the writer to select this field of study as they prepare for a pathology residency in the United States.
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Erin's feedback:

"I love the first line of your statement; it makes an interesting comparison that grabbed my attention, and I like that you carried that theme throughout your statement. However, your statement contains numerous errors in grammar, punctuation, and word choice, along with some inconsistent spacing. Sometimes these errors are distracting and make your statement difficult to follow, especially when a sentence doesn't have a clear ending or a thought seems to end abruptly. In order to put your best foot forward as you display your passion for pathology and the program to which you're applying, I would strongly recommend a round of editing to ensure that your statement is polished."

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