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A Research Essay on the Chesapeake Bay's Pollution Problem

This research essay examines the pollution problem facing the Chesapeake Bay. It explains the science behind pollution from farming practices and describes current and proposed initiatives that can help offset damage to the bay.
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Bob's feedback:

"You demonstrate thorough knowledge of this specific type of pollution and present it in a logical way that is easy for a layperson to understand. Consider taking another look at the organization of the essay and assigning specific topics to each paragraph to avoid giving the same information more than once. Doing so would also help to avoid areas where a topic is brought up almost as a footnote. For instance, at the end of one paragraph you briefly mention the conflicting political views on the issue, but don't return to that subject until later in the paper. Since your conclusion has a lot to do with political attitudes, consider introducing this topic early and in its own paragraph."

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