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Bridget's feedback:
"You are off to a good start, and this draft shows your work researching and putting into conversation the studies and literature on the topic. Due to some odd formatting issues (random paragraph breaks), it's a little tricky to comment on some of the paragraph lengths; assuming those breaks are typos, I suggest breaking up your final long paragraph, perhaps when you step in with your own experience researching the topic. And, along with fixing up those formatting issues, proofread to catch some mechanics errors and occasional awkward diction.
The examples of famous homeschooled individuals is an odd list considering the range of time periods represented; I see that it is backed by a source but I find it exposes a bias (of the source) that should probably be reckoned with. As a final note, ongoing work on this paper, which ends around the 1990s, will need to update the statistics and data on trends; for example, I imagine this conversation has undergone some shifts post-COVID, something that would make a really interesting discussion (as would your point about extremists, a topic that is still relevant and maybe even more urgent now)."
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