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An Analysis of Luka Lesson's Poem "Please Resist Me"

This is a poem analysis PowerPoint presentation about Luka Lesson's Please Resist Me. The author details how Lesson uses rhythm, repetition, metaphors, and alliteration to convey cultural separation and discrimination. The backdrop for Lesson's poem is cultural segregation in Australia, and he writes about racism that racial minorities and immigrants face.
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Jenn's feedback:

"This paper is off to an excellent start. First, you have a strong introduction that ends with a clear and concise thesis statement. A suggestion that I have for the body of the paper is that you organize it to align with the thesis statement. For example, you mention in the introduction that you will talk about repetition, metaphor, and alliteration, but in the body of the paper, you cover alliteration, repetition, and metaphor. You also cover rhythm in the body of the paper, which is not mentioned in your thesis. Second, the content you have included in the document reflects that you are knowledgeable about the topic you are writing about. Even though this content is meant for PowerPoint slides, since there are so many quotes used, it would be good to include in-text citations so that you can avoid plagiarism issues. Third, the formatting of your paper is impeccable, with only a couple of minor spacing issues. This is important because the neater an essay is, the easier it is to read. Last, several grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure errors, some of which are distracting, need to be resolved with a round of proofreading."

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