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"You have clearly made an effort to tackle this poetry analysis, and there are some ideas here that have real potential. However, there are many grammatical errors throughout this essay, to the point where it is often difficult to understand what you are saying. The lack of in-text citations further adds to this confusion, as your quotes and paraphrases from the poem are not evident. In MLA format, every sentence that contains information from a source -- even if you are paraphrasing, not directly quoting -- needs an in-text citation. There are other formatting issues here as well; for example, paragraphs should be indented, no longer than a page, and font should not be italicized unless referring to titles of books, journals, etc. Note, too, that some sections of your essay appear to be copy/pasted more than once in this document. Go through your essay again to rewrite and reformat as needed; after you have done this, consider a round of professional editing to ensure you are on the right track."
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Kibin. (2025). An analysis of natasha trethewey's "history lesson". http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-analysis-of-natasha-tretheweys-history-lesson-1N8rBpao
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