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"You've done well in readying your evidence, and I see over the paragraphs how you back up claims with specific recourse to the text. As your next step, swap those line numbers out for direct quotations and paraphrasing-- this will enhance the discussion on a number of levels, from ethos, flow, and readability, keeping in mind that your reader will more immediately connect with words from the play (you don't want them having to look up the lines you list). By providing that evidence right away for the reader, you keep their attention and allow their focus to stay in your argumentation.
I want to check in about the various references to presidents and voting -- this is an interesting framework for this topic, and yet something of a non sequitur. Was this language provided by the prompt? (If so, clarify who the other options are.) If not, can you adjust these references to something more relevant?
As a final step, make sure to proofread. The reader encounters a number of errors, including typos and sentence boundary issues, that impact clarity."
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Kibin. (2025). The many qualities of shakespeare's marc antony. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-analysis-of-the-character-of-marc-antony-in-julius-caesar-by-william-shakespeare-YZDg5Xqh
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("The Many Qualities of Shakespeare's Marc Antony.")
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