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An Analysis of the Crime Committed in "Slip or Trip?"

This essay evaluates evidence from a story, "Slip or Trip?", to determine which character is responsible for the death of another character.
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"This is an interesting essay. It seems that you have carefully considered the evidence from the text and have laid out a cohesive explanation for who you think is responsible for the death. This essay proceeds in a logical way, and it is easy to understand how you reached your conclusion. To further improve this essay, please include some direct quotes from the text. It's not clear which citation style is being used here, but typically, a page number from the text is included so that the reader can look up the reference. In addition, there is quite a bit of informal language here; please check with your instructor to ensure that using informal language is acceptable. Please address the grammar issues before submission."

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