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Kibin. (2025). An analysis of the plot, setting, and characters in watership down. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-analysis-of-the-plot-setting-and-characters-in-watership-down-OPW2RHW5
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"Your paper is very well-formatted, which is an essential first step to a piece because a neat paper encourages better reading comprehension. You are off to a good start with the content of your essay. You have included both an introduction with a thesis statement and a conclusion. I suggest that you consider elaborating on your thesis statement by mentioning what points you will make about each topic. Also, you could elaborate on your conclusion by summarizing the main points you made in the body of the essay and relating them to your thesis statement. Because the introduction ends with a thesis statement, the purpose of your paper is clear, but the content does not communicate that you are focused on that purpose. This essay does not read as if you are comparing the audio version to the movie. It reads more like you are summarizing the story. Last, there are many spelling, grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure errors throughout your writing, starting with the novel being called Watership Down not "Downs." I would encourage you to have this paper proofread to get specific feedback to improve both cohesion and reading comprehension."
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Kibin. (2025). An analysis of the plot, setting, and characters in watership down. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-analysis-of-the-plot-setting-and-characters-in-watership-down-OPW2RHW5
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("An Analysis of the Plot, Setting, and Characters in Watership Down.")
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"An Analysis of the Plot, Setting, and Characters in Watership Down." Kibin, 2025, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-analysis-of-the-plot-setting-and-characters-in-watership-down-OPW2RHW5
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