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An Analysis of 'This is America' by Childish Gambino

This is a short, informative essay about "This is America," a song by Childish Gambino. It includes a short summary of the lyrics and an analysis of the elements and storytelling process in the music video.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Jenn's feedback:

"You did an excellent job fulfilling the requirements of the assignment. Your writing has a clear purpose and you have a strong understanding of your topic. You provide a significant amount of information and detail that supports your ideas which is good. Your paper lacks both an introduction and a conclusion. You go straight to talking about the topic rather than writing an introduction that tells the reader what they are going to read about and what the purpose of the paper is. Your paper also ends abruptly since it is lacking a conclusion that summarizes what was discussed in the body of the paper. The paper is lacking consistent formatting. There are no paragraphs which impedes readability. There is also inconsistent spacing between sentences and the margin on the left side of the paper is too big. There is little use of the style guide. There are no citations within the paper. If you do not give credit to the original authors by including citations then it seems that you are using others ideas as your own and this is considered plagiarism. The only reference you have in your Works Cited is about the Charleston shooting. You have included a lot of very specific information about aspects of the video ranging from the clothing he wears to gun violence and politics. All of this specific information that you have included should be cited. The reference you have included is also not properly formatted. Last, your paper is riddled with a large number of grammatical and spelling errors that make reading the paper challenging in places."

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