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An Argument between Socrates and Callicles in Gorgias by Plato

In this analytical paper on Plato's Gorgias, a student presents two key points Socrates makes in his argument against Callicles. The student focuses specifically on Socrates's assertion that pleasant and good are not the same.
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Angela's feedback:

"You have put your ideas together well and provided a lot of analysis and solid reasoning. Moreover, your writing has a natural flow that makes it easy to read. However, while you provide a clear argument, your thesis could use a bit more refining. As is, your conclusion presents a more definitive statement on your stance for the analysis than the introduction. In addition, it stands out that you use quoted material to support your argument in only one of your body paragraphs; distributing quotes more evenly across your body paragraphs will strengthen your credibility as an author and your argument as a whole. Finally, there are a couple of awkward word choices, and your in-text citations should be double-checked to ensure they have all the elements required for APA style."

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