An Introduction to the Commonwealth of Australia

This essay on Australia provides an overview of the country before offering a look at its governmental structure.

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"This essay boasts clarity of purpose and discussion. I recommend a concluding paragraph or statement(s) to help signal to the reader the end of the essay; I'm interested in how a conclusion will illuminate the focus on government structure and the balance of information overall. Related, I urge you to carefully consider the effect and implications of a Eurocentric approach to describing the country, making sure all decisions are purposeful and relevant to the rhetorical situation.

I spot certain areas where a bit of revision will enhance flow and focus. For example, consider, instead of two separated sentences, the following edit: "The Commonwealth of Australia is a federation of six states: New South Wales,..." Going from there, you can keep playing a bit with the organization and sentence order of that area, seeing where you can fuse together sentences for a more efficient discussion. Also at the level of syntax and diction will be proofreading. Watch out for some sentence fragments and similar minor errors that can trouble clarity."

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