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"You have put together a great overview of insomnia, and your writing voice makes the essay an engaging read. Your intro paragraph does a good job introducing your topic and drawing the reader in. However, the rhetorical questions in this paragraph and the rest of the essay are a bit overused. Rhetorical questions can be very effective in writing, but part of what makes them effective is using them sparingly and only when you really want to emphasize a point. Review is needed to ensure that end punctuation has been inserted for every sentence. There’s at least one typo with the appearance of “cam” instead of “can.” You have a tendency to overuse the comma as seen with the phrases “stress, about” and “school, or family.”"
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