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Analysis of the Soliloquies in Hamlet by William Shakespeare

In this analytical essay, a student describes the various soliloquies that appear in Hamlet by William Shakespeare. The student discusses how Hamlet's soliloquies show the audience his inner feelings, his thoughts, and his plans for the future.
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Angela's feedback:

"You faithfully analyze Hamlet's various soliloquies throughout the play, and you do a good job of placing them within the context of the story. Your work would be stronger though if you drew a clearer connection between the soliloquies and your thesis. That is, you should explain to the reader why you're analyzing the soliloquies and how this analysis ties into your main idea that Hamlet evolves as a character through the course of the play. For example, you could make the argument that Hamlet's soliloquies are a crucial aspect of the play because they show the audience how he changes as the story progresses. Instead of referring to Hamlet's father as "the King," it would make more sense to call him "King Hamlet" since Claudius becomes the new king after King Hamlet dies. Referring to King Hamlet in this manner will make it so that the reader doesn't have to think twice about which king you're referring to. Some revision is needed to take care of typos such as "in the fear" where the word "in" should be "is" and awkward phrases such as "into to be.""

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