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Character Analysis: A Raisin in the Sun

This essay analyzes each of the main characters in the film A Raisin in the Sun, based on Lorraine Hansberry's play of the same name.
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Jim's feedback:

"First, I will highlight some of the issues I noticed. Movie titles should be italicized. “Pact” should be “packed.” We write “toward” (not “towards”) in American English, and place punctuation inside quotation marks. Don't overlook the tools baked into your word processing software; obvious typographic errors would have been detected by proofreading or running a grammar check. You mismatch verbs: “ought to have looked” should be matched with “respected.” The sentence, “Should she have compromised and taken …,” is confusing; you could start instead with, “To compromise and take.” As a modifier, “two story” should be hyphenated. Place a space on either side of an ellipsis in the middle of a sentence. Notice also that the elements of a list do match in form: loss of money, Mama’s dream, and Mama to live; the last does not match. “Outcome 1” should be in lowercase. You write, “… had Ruth choose,” where “choose” should be “chosen.”

Disregarding these errors, you write clearly and logically. To fit an essay format, you should add an introduction and conclusion."

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