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Coeducation Is Better Than Single-Sex Education

In this argumentative essay, a student takes the position that coeducation is better than single-sex education. The student provides examples to show that coeducation leaves students better prepared for the real world.
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Angela's feedback:

"You make your stance on the topic clear, and it is good that each of your body paragraphs drives home the point that co-education is more advantageous than single-sex education. But more contextual information is needed when you mention the Harvard study. For example, it is unclear how many students were interviewed for the study or where these students were from. Your essay would look neater overall if you consistently indented the first line of each paragraph by half an inch. In British English, “co-education” is hyphenated; in American English, it is written as “coeducation.” Meanwhile, compound modifiers that precede a noun should be hyphenated (e.g., “single-sex schools”). The sentence that begins “It extends it” is especially awkward and should be revised for clarity. Review is needed to ensure that every sentence ends with a piece of punctuation."

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