1. Home

Comparing Percy Shelly's "Ozymandias" and William Blake's "London"

This is a comparison essay. The author compares "Ozymandias" written by Percy Shelly and "London" written by William Blake. The author points out how both poems highlight boastful, arrogant people and they both of a theme of mortality.
PAGES
2
WORDS
707
  Cite
View Full Essay
About this essay
This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley
Generating Preview...
This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley

View other essays like this one:

Jenn's feedback:

"This essay is off to a good start. It is clear from your writing what the goal is and you support that goal with evidence. Your introduction is off to a good start. You could add a bit more detail to make it more clear what the goal of your essay is, such as specifically mentioning the aspects of the poems you will be comparing. There are also a significant number of grammar issues in the introduction (i.e., the unnecessary use of "the," improper word choice such as "held from" rather than "held by," and the use of "are" instead of "is"), setting a tone for the paper. These grammatical errors continue throughout the rest of the text with an addition of punctuation errors. Some of these errors lead to confusion because there are sentences lacking ending punctuation. You also inconsistently use punctuation. Sometimes you put the titles of poems in quotation marks (at times the spacing is inappropriate when this is done) and sometimes you did not. Using the quotation marks is the appropriate use of punctuation. You are lacking the use of commas after introductory phrases and appropriately documented citations. Last, the conclusion should be elaborated upon by including a detailed summary of the main points of the paper."

Learn more about this feedback