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How COVID-19 Has Impacted the Education Sector in India

This essay is about the impact Covid-19 has had on the education system in India. The author highlights how the traditional education system had to shift to internet learning and the pros and cons of such a shift. The author mentions that the comfort of learning from home, cost effectiveness, source availability, less academic stress, parental guidance, time for extracurricular activities, and improve communication are all pros of online learning. The author went on to mention that technological problems, teacher unfamiliarity, limited types of interactions, the lack of midday meals, families having limited to no access when poor, the necessity for self-discipline, and health problems caused by excessive screen time are all cons of online learning. The author also discusses how UNESCO and NCERT have been instrumental in helping the shift occur.
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"You have a lot of good information here and are off to a great start with this paper. The first way to improve this paper is by creating a clear and detailed introduction and conclusion. The introduction should share the main topic they will be reading about and a few details about it. It should also end with a thesis statement that lets the reader know why this topic is important. The thesis statement should also guide the body of the paper, allowing for it to be written in a focused manner. The conclusion should then round off the article by summarizing the main points made in the body of the paper and relating them to the thesis statement. While the content of your paper is excellent, since there is so much factual information, I suggest that you make sure any information you obtained from another source is followed by an in-text citation to avoid plagiarism issues. Your paper is formatted quite neatly, which helps improve overall reading comprehension and cohesion. There is one place where a heading is supposed to be, and it is not bold or underlined.

Last, one of the areas that could use the most work is your use of grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation. Much of your text reads like a list of information. When you write, act as if you are telling a story. Make sure that there are transitions that create relationships between new ideas. Also, feel free to elaborate on ideas, so the information flows better. Consider allowing another pair of eyes to read through this for you and offer you some specific feedback about sentence structure and grammar."

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