1. Home

How the Alliance System Made World War Inevitable in 1914

This argumentative essay examines the causes of World War I. The student identifies the roles of militarism, imperialism, and nationalism as contributive to the alliance system that served as ultimate cause in pushing a regional conflict toward global war.
PAGES
2
WORDS
725
  Cite
View Full Essay
About this essay
This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley
Generating Preview...
This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

More essays like this:

Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
- Jenna Kraig, student @ UCLA
Wow. Most helpful essay resource ever!
- Chris Stochs, student @ UC Berkeley

View other essays like this one:

Bridget's feedback:

"You do a good job staying on topic, and spending time with the counterarguments (militarism, imperialism, etc.) shows good engagement with the field and solid rhetoric. My main recommendation in moving this to the next level is to review the first three paragraphs, as a handful of ideas and points are repeated. This causes some redundancy and a little confusion in that first half of the paper. You might consider an alternative organization, and/or more stringent boundaries between the paragraphs. I likewise recommend eliminating any counterfactual arguments, though this not a major problem in your essay, which overall shows very good mastery of the time period and WWI historiography."

Learn more about this feedback