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How the Quote "Chaos is a Friend of Mine" Applies to My Life

This reflective essay showed goals the writer wished to achieve and persevering through difficult times as they continued through life. The author focuses specifically on a quote about chaos by Bob Dylan and how that quote applies to his life.
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Christina's feedback:

"The hook of your essay is interesting and leads into your thesis statement about the quote pretty well. I think you strike a good conversational tone for your essay, but I'm not sure that it's exactly appropriate for academic writing -- even a reflective essay like this. You want your personality and writing style to come through, yes, but be weary of being too informal in academic spaces. However, some instructors do call for an informal tone. The paragraphs are well-focused, so nicely done there! Be sure to proofread or edit your essay to catch the remaining grammar and punctuation errors."

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