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Kate Chopin's Writing Style in The Story of an Hour

This essay discusses "The Story of an Hour" by Kate Chopin. The student describes how the author's third-person narration allows particular insights into the characters and plot.
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Bob's feedback:

"You've done a great job of identifying how Chopin's writing style affects the storytelling, specifically the third-person narration. However, your first supporting paragraph relies heavily on quotes with little original analysis. Make sure you are saying in your own words what you want to convey (this improves as the paper goes on), and that the quotations you do use are integrated smoothly. There are several awkward sentences as well as grammatical issues (make sure to capitalize the name of the story) that should be addressed. It should also be noted that the author is female (you refer to her as "he"). Consider having the essay read by a peer or proofreader to address clarity issues."

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