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Missy Is an Unlikely Leader in the Film, We Can Be Heroes

In this analytical essay, the student discusses the character of Missy Moreno in the movie We Can Be Heroes. Despite her lack of superpowers, Missy shows that even unlikely figures can be good leaders.
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Bob's feedback:

"Missy seems like a great example of an unlikely leader. You get the idea across that leadership can come from unexpected places.

Your essay tends to meander between different ideas. Consider making an outline with a main topic for each paragraph and work on transitions between ideas. For example, the physical description of Missy seems to come out of nowhere and interrupts the flow of the paper.

Be sure to give enough context. You mention that Wild Card looks down upon Missy, but in the next sentence, you say that he realizes that she can be a good leader. Your reader isn't given a solid idea of what changed.

Work with a proofreader to address awkward sentences, unclear ideas, and poor transitions."

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