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My Goals for 6th Grade

This is a short personal essay describing a sixth-grade student's goals for the coming year, which are to improve their vocabulary, consistently work hard on assignments, and "be smarter."
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Talia's feedback:

"You have some awesome goals for the year! I really hope you achieve them! You might want to think about coming up with some specific strategies for putting effort into your work. For example, one strategy could be "I will work on homework in a quiet place, and I will not try to watch TV or go on my phone (or my parents' phones) until I am done working." I noticed that you didn't explain the goal of "being smarter," and I am curious to know what you mean by that and how you plan to achieve it. I would also recommend that you add a conclusion at the end of your essay. Finally, there are some errors in grammar throughout your essay. I'd recommend that you have a friend, parent, or Kibin editor give you some full feedback so that it ends up in great shape! Also, if your teacher is strict about style guidelines, make sure to look up MLA style and format your heading based on those guidelines!"

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