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My Personal Code of Ethics

This personal essay reflects on the student's own code of ethics. The student explores in detail a hierarchy of values and uses the issue of prison abolition as a personal case study in grappling with conflicting feelings.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"You've written an honest, complex reflection. Your investigation of yourself, your feelings, and the concepts more generally are explored deeply. I noticed some inconsistent formatting (some paragraphs are not indented) and occasions where the syntax should be refined for clarity and flow, but overall the writing and presentation guide the reader smoothly. My main recommendation is regarding your final section where you discuss the two examples. Proper title formatting ensures the reader is immediately placed within your discussion: titles will either be italicized or in quotation marks--never both. I would further recommend providing some background or context. Because "38 Who Saw Murder" is not the full article title (and because it is also italicized, confusing the reader), it takes awhile for the reader to be able to assume you are discussing Gansberg's original article (which I believe is the case). Finally, I suggest a concluding paragraph to wrap things up and reinforce the main takeaways. Otherwise, the final thoughts in the reader's mind might be the really specific details from your two examples, and this may not allow them to "exit" the paper with the bigger picture in mind."

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