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Ned Kelly Is a Victim in Black Snake: The Daring of Ned Kelly by Carole Wilkinson

This is a brief analysis of Ned Kelly as portrayed in the book Black Snake: The Daring of Ned Kelly by Carole Wilkinson. The student makes the case that Kelly is a victim of circumstance rather than a villain.
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Bob's feedback:

"You make a good case for Ned Kelly being a victim of circumstance rather than a villain. Make sure you are giving enough context when referencing a scene from the book. Imagine that your reader isn't familiar with the story and you have to set the scene so they can understand the circumstances behind the character's actions.

Make sure to have the paper proofread as there are a number of errors in word choice, grammar, and punctuation.

Your introduction should only present your main idea without getting into specific arguments.

There is a fair amount of repetition (especially restating that Ned Kelly is a victim). Try to find other ways to word this, or remove instances where it isn't necessary to restate the point."

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