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Plastic Water Bottles Should Be Banned

In this argumentative essay, a student looks at the impact of plastic water bottles on the environment and the economy. The student asserts that plastic water bottles should be banned because even though they are technically recyclable, the majority of them are not recycled.
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Angela's feedback:

"You've crafted a compelling essay arguing in favor of a ban on plastic water bottles. The overall structure of your essay makes sense, and your counterargument paragraph works effectively to continue supporting your thesis. Some minor writing convention issues concern comma placement in relation to quoted material. A comma comes before a closing quotation mark. Although you integrate quotes well into the essay, note that whenever possible, a specific piece of location information (such as a page number) is typically included in the citation for a direct quote. In MLA style, paragraphs should be aligned to the left instead of justified. A hyperlink should only be included in a work if you're submitting a digital copy of it; if the reader won't be able to access the hyperlink, it should be removed."

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