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Kibin. (2025). Medical testing on animals is unnecessary and cruel. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-advantages-and-disadvantages-of-animal-testing-szaSMTV7
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"It is clear that your essay is arguing against animal testing for medical research purposes, and you've made a few strong claims to support this purpose. However, your essay would be much more compelling if you backed up these claims with *cited* research. Citations lend credibility to your argument, especially if they point to reliable sources of information, and as it stands, your claims simply aren't well-supported yet. The sentence structure, punctuation, and grammar errors in this piece do detract from the score and impede readability in places. "
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Kibin. (2025). Medical testing on animals is unnecessary and cruel. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-advantages-and-disadvantages-of-animal-testing-szaSMTV7
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("Medical Testing on Animals Is Unnecessary and Cruel.")
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"Medical Testing on Animals Is Unnecessary and Cruel." Kibin, 2025, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-advantages-and-disadvantages-of-animal-testing-szaSMTV7
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1. "Medical Testing on Animals Is Unnecessary and Cruel." Kibin, 2025. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-advantages-and-disadvantages-of-animal-testing-szaSMTV7.
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"Medical Testing on Animals Is Unnecessary and Cruel." Kibin, 2025. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-advantages-and-disadvantages-of-animal-testing-szaSMTV7.
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