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The Death Penalty Is Not an Effective Crime Deterrent

In this argumentative essay, the student claims that capital punishment should not be practiced by the government. The student argues that capital punishment does not serve as an effective deterrent and causes harm to society.
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Bob's feedback:

"You make some compelling arguments against capital punishment, and with some adjustments, this could be a strong paper. The most obvious issue is that the essay should be divided into paragraphs. This is the standard practice for any essay as it improves readability and allows your reader to follow shifts in focus. Quotations should be used to support your arguments; not to make your arguments for you. It is especially important not to stack quotations back-to-back. Your job is to provide the analysis of your subject rather than curate the analyses others have made. On the other hand, factual claims that you make should be backed up by evidence and/or outside sources."

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