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The Disadvantages of Single-Sex Education

In this argumentative essay, a student takes the position that mixed-sex education is better than single-sex education. The student explains how single-sex education leaves pupils unprepared to face real-world challenges and interactions.
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Angela's feedback:

"You present some valid points about the negatives of single-sex schools, but your second body paragraph is a lot stronger in terms of content than your first and third body paragraphs. Your weaker body paragraphs have the overlapping idea that single-sex schools don’t effectively prepare students for the real world. Making a finer distinction between your supporting points in these paragraphs would strengthen your essay. The paper would also look neater and be easier to read if you indented the first line of each paragraph by half an inch. Your period placement needs revision; periods should come immediately after the last word in a sentence and then be followed by a space before the beginning of the next word in the new sentence."

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