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"You introduce a number of good points about context and impact, but the current organization and argumentation makes the project of the essay rather hard to follow. The very broad opening sentences means the reader doesn't have a good footing from the start: is this essay about literature, the literature of the Philippines, or Bernido's memoirs? Currently, the first and last paragraphs suggest a more general discussion about how literature is shaped; however, this project is not further made clear in the middle paragraph. The first shorter paragraph and the second longer paragraph share many common points that don't benefit from the repetition--revise these two paragraphs to eliminate redundancy. This may entail some reorganization--perhaps a shorter, highly focused opening paragraph with a more clear thesis statement, and then the longer exploration."
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Kibin. (2024). The filipino experience of the japanese occupation in literature. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-filipino-experience-of-the-japanese-occupation-in-literature-cXBeeiWt
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