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The Controversial Debate on Juvenile Trials in Adult Courts

This essay raises the question of whether juveniles should be tried as adults for certain crimes. The student weighs the pros and cons and decides that doing so is both ineffective and immoral.
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Bob's feedback:

"Your paper has been written and researched well. You present both sides of the argument clearly and without any overt signs of bias. This lends credibility to you as you express your own opinion at the end.

In the last few paragraphs, as you give your own thoughts, don't be afraid to lean on the research you've done. Your stance on the issue is stated in an almost conversational tone. Consider the following sentence, for example: "I do not see how a person can view a thirteen-year-old boy in the same light as a fully grown adult." Since you've already provided support for this idea, don't be afraid to refer back to it. This way, your stance isn't simply your opinion but is backed by research and can carry more weight.

There are a few small errors including a number of sentence fragments that should be addressed with a thorough proofread."

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