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The Meat Industry and the Environment

In this argumentative essay, a student asserts that the meat industry as it exists today is disastrous for the environment and humans. The student provides evidence that shows the meat industry's negative impact on climate change, water use, air quality, and human health in terms of cancer development.
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Angela's feedback:

"Your essay is organized well, and you've crafted a compelling argument overall. You chose good examples to support each of your main points concerning the negative effects of the meat industry. Moreover, you did an especially good job of weaving direct quotes into your own analysis. Although there's no need for major changes to be made, you should review your essay to address problems with formatting and writing conventions. There's a point in your essay where a paragraph ends mid-sentence with the rest of the sentence starting the subsequent paragraph; this can be very jarring and distracting to the reader. In addition, you have a tendency to mix up "lead" and "led.""

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