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An Examination of Modern Migration Throughout the World

This informative essay takes a look at migration around the world. It examines why migration happens and gives specific examples of areas where large migrations are taking place today.
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Bob's feedback:

"There is a lot of good information here, but it requires some organization as well as a solid introduction and conclusion. When presenting statistics, make sure you give adequate context. For instance, when you say "there were about 243 million migrants," it is impossible to tell whether you mean worldwide or in a single area as well as over what period of time. It would be a good idea to note that the different types of migration are not mutually exclusive. The anecdote about your grandfather and the information about changing laws in the UK both feel out of place. The personal story lacks a transition and is the only such passage, whereas the information about the legislation is a new topic introduced at the very end of the paper rather than in a body paragraph."

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