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The Negative Effects of Technology Use in Education

In this argumentative essay, a student discusses how technology use in education has had a negative effect on teachers, students, and families. The student asserts that such technology use slows down classroom activities for teachers and students and may cause families financial hardship.
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Angela's feedback:

"You have a solid thesis statement, and the overall structure of your essay makes sense. However, your quoted material isn’t always a good fit for your argument. Your first quote in particular doesn’t line up well with your supporting point, so you should either find a different quote to use or revise your analysis. Meanwhile, even though it’s commendable that you’re trying to incorporate many academic vocabulary words in the essay, there are a number of word choice problems, as seen with the use of “indigenous,” “comprise,” and “fracas.” Your semicolon use should also be revisited, and there are some issues with the possessive form of a word."

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