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The Roles of Nursing Professionals in Guiding Therapeutic Groups and Shaping Practice

This overview of the use of group therapy provides an introduction to its postwar development, the steps for forming groups and the different models used, and advantages and disadvantages of the practice. The paper also examines specific responsibilities and strategies for nurses in group therapy settings.
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Bridget's feedback:

"Your paper is focused and has good organization across the pages. Compared to the introduction and body discussion, the final concluding paragraph is a little abrupt; consider ways to use those final lines to make a deeper impact on the reader and their understanding not just of the ideas but also of the paper's purpose (for example, references to nurses kick in more frequently in the second half of the paper; if this is a main focus, make sure to mention nurses in the final lines).

Your writing is clear and has good flow, so just keep an eye on minor revisions that can help bring further clarity (e.g., "It was then decided to combine them..." from the first paragraph -- what/who is "it" and "them"?). Your usage of APA 7 formatting is overall good, with only a few areas that will need to be cleaned up, including the gray text color in the Halter (2018) citations, making sure to properly integrate direct quotations, and the use of italics in the references. Because the source usage is quite robust, I wondered if the claim at the top of page 3 "they are excellent at..." was missing a citation, as this is rather broad and unsubstantiated."

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