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"This is a good essay that will benefit from more concise writing. The text should be left-justified and not centered. A citation should be preceded by a space. The phrase “political era” occurs three times in two lines of text. Later, “Vollmer” appears at the end of one sentence and the beginning of the next. Such duplication should be avoided. The political era is described in the past tense, but “provide” is present tense. Note that “let” should be “led.” The word “had” should be deleted at the end of page 1. Note the lack of capitalization to start a sentence on page 2. The last sentence is long and confusing, and should be simplified. It might strengthen the conclusion to explain why the next era will be problem-oriented."
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Kibin. (2025). The three eras of policing. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-three-eras-of-policing-w5wRO7OW
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