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The United States Government Should Regulate Prescription Drug Prices

In this argumentative essay, a student asserts that the U.S. government should be doing more to regulate prescription drug prices. The student discusses why lifesaving medication is often so expensive and how this problem can be remedied.
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Angela's feedback:

"You put together a compelling argument for more government regulation of prescription drug prices. Your second paragraph is especially strong because you do a superb job of providing an overview of your essay's a content. But there are a number of edits that could be made to strengthen the quality of your writing. The word "hepatitis" should not be capitalized unless it appears at the beginning of a sentence, and your use of apostrophes should be revised in phrases such as "Drug manufacturer's claim." Meanwhile, there are some sentence structure issues. For example, there's a problem with parallel structure with the pairing of "living" and "die" in the last sentence of your first paragraph. Run-on sentences such as the one beginning "The doctor calms" should also be recast to improve the flow of your work. Regardless of the style guide you're following, including a URL in an in-text citation is typically discouraged since URLs tend to detract from a text's uniformity."

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