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Understanding Debussy, Satie, and Stravinsky as Innovators

In this essay on Debussy, Satie, and Stravinsky, the student emphasizes each composer's work in creating new forms and approaches to music.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You describe the composers' works, lives, and styles in a lively way that expresses their impact. This engages the reader and develops your ethos. I had a little trouble putting my finger on how you chose the three composers beyond their legacies, which casts a pretty wide net. Stravinsky in particular feels a little outside the group, including in the presentation: Stravinsky isn't introduced using the year he was born, as you do with the other two--creating parallel structures for each can help create a sense of cohesiveness that can enhance the paper's focus. Can you explore the framework for the essay's choices and analysis a little more, either in the opening or closing? Does personal choice come into it? An assigned prompt? I also recommend a very careful proofread for errors, including comma splices, and some awkward or unclear phrasing."

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