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Why Competition Is Beneficial in Education

In this argumentative essay, a student explains why competition is beneficial in education. The student asserts that competition helps students learn teamwork, keeps students motivated, and improves social and emotional learning in students.
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Angela's feedback:

"You have a clear thesis statement, and it’s good that your body paragraphs match up with different supporting points for your main argument. The hook is also very catchy. However, the placement of your counterargument paragraph is odd since such a paragraph is typically featured as the last body paragraph in an argumentative work. Meanwhile, there are a number of edits that can be made to address writing convention errors. Run-on sentences and sentence fragments should be recast for clarity. There are also problems with parallel structure, and review is needed to ensure all sentences are punctuated. A question should end with a question mark instead of a period. Citations should be provided for all direct quotes, and your use of the semicolon needs to be revisited. A space should be inserted between a closing quotation mark and an opening parenthesis."

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