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Why Immunizations Should Not Be Mandated: A Persuasive Essay

This persuasive essay provides content regarding the reasons why immunizations should not be mandatory, including the possibility of the needle being dirty, needles are not 100% effective, and bad reactions from shots.
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Christina's feedback:

"You did well offering the reader a purpose statement, letting them know your opinion on immunizations and if they should be mandated. Let’s make sure you are including at least five sentences in each paragraph, including the introduction and conclusion. The introduction should have an overview of what you will be discussing in your body paragraphs with your focus statement. The conclusion should have a summary of the body paragraphs and a takeaway for the reader. When using MLA style for writing your papers or essays, let’s review your guidelines to ensure the correct placement and format of your in-text citations and your works cited page. Let’s resolve any issues of punctuation, word usage, spelling, and capitalization by getting a round of editing completed before submitting your work."

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