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Why The Song In The End by Linkin Park Reflects My Life Story

This is a reflective essay in which the author has to identify what opening song they would have at the beginning of a movie about their life and why. The author chose "In the End" by Linkin Park.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You did a great job explaining your general perspective on life and providing specific examples from your life that relate to each song lyric you chose to include in your paper. You also organized and formatted your essay in a neat manner, making it easier to read. In your writing, you have a habit of inconsistently switching back and forth between perspectives mid-sentence (from your point of view and from the point of view of others), so your grammar is inconsistent. Also, since the essay is supposed to be about you and your perspective, it feels like you talk a little too much about how other people feel. Consider going into more detail about your perspective rather than only using your perspective to summarize ideas. There are a number of punctuation errors throughout the essay that need to be resolved. Last, use the conclusion as an opportunity to refer back to the question and the main points you made in the paper. Right now, the conclusion feels disconnected since the information in it is not related to the rest of the paper."

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